Firefighter of The Mind
Firefighter of The Mind
Growing up, Rachel Collins
dreamed of becoming a firefighter, but today she’s putting out fires of a
different kind. Numerous experiences throughout her young life have shaped
Collins’ future, and have led her into her career path of high school counseling
today. Many of these instances have showed her what exactly in education is
lacking and would eventually lead her to find ways to improve the system, in
her future.
Collins was singled out in
third grade for her spelling skills, which then led to an eye-opening moment to
the unfairness in schooling. Throughout her childhood Rachel always struggled
with spelling while her peers around her thrived. Her issues prompted her
teacher to place her in a second-grade classroom for spelling, since she was
below the expectations of her grade. During this time, she reported feelings of
stupidity, and exclaimed that the teacher had “hurt her soul”. In addition to
this, another way that Rachel felt singled out in her early life, was that she
was the only student of color in her classroom. This resulted in feelings of loneliness
in elementary. At such a young, tender age, Collins had her first glimpse of the
lack of empathy in the world of education.
Throughout her high school
years, Collins reported being average academically. However, there was always
one class she struggled with—math. Because she had a hard time with this class,
she asked a lot of questions. Unfortunately, the teacher did not take these
questions seriously, as they thought Collins was just being sarcastic, and sent
her out the door. This incident happened numerous times, and just gave her
another reason to doubt the education system.
Collins got a glimpse of how
educators can influence how the learning process goes, when she was confronted
by her LA teacher about her talent. They claimed they saw a “spark” in her,
which renewed her confidence, and gave her hope for a good future. It was at
this point in her life that she realized how impactful teachers could be on how
well and poorly things could go in the classroom. This shaped her overall path
in life, giving her the motivation to go on to help and assist students on the
verge of adulthood.
In college, she went on to
receive a degree in language arts because she was impacted by the teacher she
crossed paths with as a student. Although she loved teaching, she saw how
important positive figures in a student’s life could be and wanted to do more
with helping students with their emotional needs. This desire led her to pursue
a career in counseling. Rachel’s favorite area of counseling is working with
students through their problems and helping them sort out their messy emotions.
While she went through many
phases in her life, from wanting to be a firefighter to a counselor, she always
desired to leave a positive impact on the world. So, while she may not be
putting out fires today, she considers herself to be a firefighter of the mind.
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